Author commentary… from the FUTURE!

The explosion looks cool, despite the first panel with punctual man in it being kind of gross. Tone down on the glow past me, just tone it down, your at an eleven, you need to be at a two.

I think the original idea for this was to have a superhero who could speak every language, but it didn’t really work until I decided to change it to punctual man. You gotta work on these things sometimes before they’re good, and this one, I think at least, is good.

Reader comments

comments powered by Disqus